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Friday, July 8, 2016

My Haiku Poem!





We went hiking On

Monday Hiking was tiring

Running down was fun

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jack,
    I really liked reading your Haiku Poem, Next time you can explain where you went and how long it took.

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  2. Hi Jack
    That was a good poem about the hiking but what I would suggest for next time is add a bit more like where did you go hiking and how long did it take you to hike.
    Kind Regards Chris
    Awahono School

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