This is a record of my learning during my time at Yaldhurst Model School.
Hi Jack,I really liked reading your Haiku Poem, Next time you can explain where you went and how long it took.
Hi JackThat was a good poem about the hiking but what I would suggest for next time is add a bit more like where did you go hiking and how long did it take you to hike.Kind Regards ChrisAwahono School
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Hi Jack,
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your Haiku Poem, Next time you can explain where you went and how long it took.
Hi Jack
ReplyDeleteThat was a good poem about the hiking but what I would suggest for next time is add a bit more like where did you go hiking and how long did it take you to hike.
Kind Regards Chris
Awahono School