This weeks 100wc prompt was "As The Smoke Cleared." Here is my story. I hope you enjoy!
I’m walking home from the dairy nek minnit, I see everything I own burning down. I get my garden hose and started putting it out. As the smoke cleared I could see my PPS6 still working from when I was trickshotting with my grandma. I walked inside through the burnt wood and shattered glass. The first thing I get is my PPS6 and I put in on my bike and biked away down the street to my friend franklin's house to do some more trickshotting I knocked on her door and she let me in. We on the PPS6 for 24 hours
You have used the challenge of writing about the smoke clearing to illustrate for the reader your love of the PPS6. As the reader I am now very interested in what you (of the character you are writing about) loves about the PPS6. I would love to read about that. I also wonder what started the fire.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.