The Day Of Bad Luck
I was walking through the forest when I heard a large crack.I walked over to where the sound was coming from... I got grabbed on the leg from behind...It felt like an eel wrapping around my leg. It pulled me into the hole that it came out of , I was screaming,"HELP!" Nobody heard me. After a while I broke free and started to run away. As I was walking past a pond, the day after I got pulled into a hole, A whale jumped out of the pond and landed on me... Horrible day to be me.
I know this is great writing because some of the ideas and descriptions make me cringe. I don't like the idea of an eel wrapped around my leg. It is superb to see you using your unbridled imagination. Keep it up!
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